I loved riding the bus downtown to work. It gave me a chance to people watch. Plus it was great not having to deal with traffic.
There was a particularly pretty girl that I would see once or twice a week on the bus. She had platinum blond hair, fair complexion and deep blue eyes. She always wore a long white down coat. Dressed like this she stood out from the crowd, most people dressed in black or other dark colors that are popular during winter. Despite the thick down coat, I could see hints that she had an amazing figure underneath it all. I normally saw her during rush hour in the afternoons, when the bus was usually packed. One day I was lucky enough to find the seat next to hear empty. I took no time to grab it. She was dressed as usual, with the long white down coat, looking like an angel.
She was reading a book. When the bus hit a pothole, the book slipped from her hands and landed at my feet.
"I'm sorry, I'm so clumsy," she blushed, as she stumbled to try to pick it up. I then noticed her mittens.
"That coat looks interesting. You can't remove your mittens, can you? "
"No I can't. The mittens are part of the coat. Somewhat inconvenient I know, but my hands are always quite toasty!"
"Yeah, I could imagine. But why do you wear such a coat?"
"It's not my idea. Mother insists that I wear it when I out. She is over protective in general, maybe even a bit dominant, and this is one of the ways in which she manifests it. She insists that I dress warmly. 'Idle hands are the devil's plaything,' mother also says. So it's better if my hands are put away inside my mittens. She had this coat custom made for me, and she believes it's of great benefit for me to wear it every day." I was aghast as she was telling me this.
"Ok ... Please excuse if I'm being indiscreet, but why do you submit to her?"
"I tried to rebel while in high school. It was humiliating being dressed like this while everyone was dressed normally. But mother was always very dominating, so after a while I just started complying despite the discomfort..." she paused for an uncomfortable second... "Please excuse my manners, I'm telling you all this and I don't even know you..."
"No worries, it's a pleasure." I replied, meanwhile contemplating the details of her coat. It was long, reaching slightly below her knees. It was fitted around her waist, and it had a criss crossing quilting pattern throughout. The thick quilted mittens were attached to the coat, although it wasn't obvious at first sight since they were attached underneath the cuffs of the coat. The cuffs had zippers to prevent pulling the hands out of the mittens. Tracy had the coat zipped up all the way to up, with a little bit of fur showing at the top of the collar. The coat also had a big oversized fur trimmed hood.
"Well, then ... Hi, my name is Tracy!" she giggled.
"Nice to meet you."
"Well, my stop is coming up..."
"Could I ask you for you phone number..."
"I apologize, but mother wouldn't approve, since I barely got to know you. But I think I've seen you before on this bus..." Tracy said with a wink.
"Yes, I take it every morning to get to work."
"So do I, so I'll see you again." And with that, the angel in white left the bus.
Three days passed until I saw Tracy again. She was sitting down next to some other passenger, but when she saw me get on the bus, she moved over to an empty seat and signaled me over. She was hard to miss in that white coat.
"Hello, great to see you again," she said.
"Great to see you too."
After some idle for chat, I asked her out for coffee again
"Well, for that I would like you to introduce you to my mother ahead of time... If you don't mind..."
"Ok..."
"I apologise, I don't mean to impose..."
"No, it's ok... I understand. Although I imagine your mother is not easy to please."
"Well, you're right about that." She smiled with the sweetest smile ever.
"Well, how can I get on her good side?"
She laughed, "are you serious?"
"Yes, I'm serious. Do you want to try me?"
"You'll probably laugh at this, but I'm sure she would be a lot more receptive about us hanging together if you showed up in coat similar to the one I'm wearing..."
"You mean with attached mittens?" I didn't laugh.
"Yes, like mother says 'Idle hands are the devil's plaything,' even more so with boys."
"But where would I get such a coat?"
"I can take you to the seamstress where mother has my coats made for me. I'm sure she can set you up with something similar."
"I imagine it wouldn't hurt to try..."
"I can take you there, maybe tomorrow after work? I get off with at five..."
"I... Well..."
"I'm sorry, I understand if it's too much..." She looked at me with big eyes.
"No...ummm... I'll see you there." I answered feeling butterflies in my stomach.
Tracy and I meet in a nondescript store on the old part of downtown. A simple store in an old art deco building. There no exhibits, but from the outside you could see plenty of fabrics and other sewing supplies. Three ladies were busy working sewing machines. It looked busy! The sign outside just read: "Quality custom apparel and alterations." I stepped inside the intriguing little shop. Tracy was already inside chatting with one of the seamstresses. Despite the fact that it was warm inside, Tracy was still wearing her coat! I have to admit that I was eager to find out what was underneath that thick down coat.
An older lady approached me, "good afternoon, young man. My name is Astrid, and I'll be taking your measurements today." She was a mature women, with the demeanor of a caring grandma, but the efficiency and professionalism of an artisan. She was very thorough, yet it took less than 10 minutes to take all of my measurements.
"And do you want the locking zipper just like your coats?" I looked at the seamstress with a puzzled face.
"Yes, of course. I want all of the extras," Tracy answered and then looked at me. " Don't fret, it's just a zipper designed to only hold when at the very top. If you don't fully close your coat, the zipper will just slide down. Either you commit to wearing your jacket, or don't even bother." I was speechless. "I just want you to feel what I feel." She winked.
For someone who was told today by her mother what to wear, Tracy was seemed very domineering herself. I couldn't help but wonder how her mother was!
And what were all the extras?
"Here's your jacket." Calling this a jacket was quite the understatement. It looked like a grey sleeping bag with arms and a huge hood. What was I getting myself into? "Do you want me to help you put it on?" Astrid asked.
She started to carefully pull the coat up my arms. It was a snug fit, but not too tight. It was hard to tell from the outside how snug the coat was, since it was so bulky. It was strange to feel my hands not reach the end of the sleeves. Astrid closed the zippers of the outer cuffs, making the coat very snug at the wrist. My hands were now trapped in the attached mittens!
Astrid pulled up the main zipper and I could feel the snugness of the thick quilted collar around my neck. Once the zipper reached the top, a faint click signaled that the zipper had engaged. The coat reached down to my knees, longer than any coat or jacket I owned. Astrid pulled the thick hood up, and suddenly I felt trapped in the coat. I began to try to fumble the zipper, but between the limited vision from inside my thick hood, and the thick mittens, it was really hard to fumble with the zipper. Astrid put her hand on my shoulder and tried to calm me.
"Relax you'll get used to it. It's a very nice coat, you'll be nice and hot all zipped up in it. This is what you wanted, right?" Thinking about it, Tracy had picked every detail, from the light grey color, the length of the coat (she had told Astrid to make it as long as possible while still looking masculine), she wanted at least ten pounds of down (which now I felt weighed a lot on my shoulders, and made the inside of the coat very snug). Looking in a mirror, I looked like the marshmallow man. The coat was very puffy!
I paid the balanced I owed (which was a pretty penny I have to say), and left. I was anxious for Tracy to see me wearing the coat.
I began wearing my new coat religiously every day on my way to and from work, hoping to see Tracy again. But she was nowhere to be found...
The days went by, and I kept using my new coat. It was warm and toasty, so I was grateful on the coldest days of winter. I began to get used to the attached mittens, although it really did limit me when I wore it. The truth is it was heavy, hot, stuffy, it was hard to put on, and it was hard to remove. It was also awkward that the zipper would only stay closed at the very top, so I always had to wear it fully closed. Bundled up, it did get a little bit too warm when I wore it on the bus, but the whole idea was for Tracy to see me wearing it and being subjected to something similar to the regime imposed on her by her mother.That was the whole point of getting this coat, wasn't it? Even if it was exhausting being bundled in such a thick warm coat.
A couple of weeks later, with still no sight of Tracy, I was riding the bus to work, bundled in my coat and vacantly staring out the window when a gorgeous brunette with curly hair sat next to me. Within a few seconds she turned towards me and asked:
"Interesting coat. You can't remove your mittens, can you? "
... The end?
Please keep writting. I like your storied
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it. There's more stuff coming soon.
DeleteHi nice story, its good if you push hard in the punishment during the story.
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it. You might enjoy some of the stuff that will posted in the future. Some of the stories that I'm motivated to write will seem relatively "mild."
DeleteI also enjoy your writing and the subject matter.
ReplyDeleteGreat to hear that, it's important to know that there's an audience ��
DeleteHi,when do you post a new story?
ReplyDeleteIt should be soon. However due to other commitments I have I prefer not to put hard dates that I might miss. If you want to know when new material is posted, I suggest you subscribe to the blog.
DeleteHi, I realy like your stories, but the Reply as Anonymous did never work, so this is a test. Regards Mr.George
ReplyDeleteGreat, now it works, it is not to stay anonymous but I have no sufficient account to use for posting. I like your stile and in Special the fact that you look (Like in fat camp) also for Details "arround" the down fetish. E.g. I like ladies dressed in warm woollen or Fleece layers under her down coats to make her (as regular Regime or punishment) sweating under her coats, jackets, scarfs and mittens. Also the weather must not be soo cold to Dress her like that - if you know what I mean. In case you want me to share some ideas in the "Background" (like a Kind of co-author) you can contact me via my mail addy mrgeorge_de @ yahoo.de (of Course no space between the Name and the Domain) Regards, Mr.George
ReplyDeleteTo answer your question if this should be the end of the Story:
ReplyDeleteDefenitly NOT - please not! Ther is still so much to tell in this Story, e.g. due to the guys coat Tracy gets the permission from her mother to invite him to her home. She pics him up at the bus Station and both go to Tracys home. There - for the first time, he sees what Tracy has to wear under her coat. He is just wearing a Cotton Shirt with a tie to look serious, and maybe a short sleeve t-shirt, as it was not that cold on this sunday afternoon, and the coat is nearly overprotecting from his Point of view. But Tracy wears a polar Fleece zip-sweater over at least two woolen turtleneck Sweaters. And a down pant over a termo leggin with rendeers and snow flake design (and tells him later about the woolen tights she has to wear the whole year. - Just ideas, but please continue the Story with Tracy asap. Regards, Mr.George
Thanks for the feedback. Hopefully I'll have time to continue this story (or any of the others I have). For now I'm trying to focus on a new multi part story that will hopefully debut in the few days. I also have plenty of ideas for other stories, but stay tuned. Reading the comments helps me know what people like best.
DeleteLove the storytelling keep up the great work. Can some down item get damaged and feathers fly in the next story's?
ReplyDeleteHonestly I really don't know how to introduce something like that, but I'll keep it in mind.
DeleteVery interesting story! It has me so intrigued for the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it. I have a few ideas but no concrete plan. Right now I'm focusing on finishing "Lady of Chadwick Manor," but hopefully in the future I'll have time to revisit some of the older stories.
DeleteAnother really good story
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